Coming in just under the wire, here’s my entry for Susanna Leonard Hill’s 7th Annual Holiday Contest. For this contest, entrants wrote a children’s holiday story, featuring a surprise, in 250 words or less.
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SANTA VERSUS THE TOOTH FAIRY
Not a creature was stirring, not even a…
Wait! The mouse was stirring.
And the cat, who chased the mouse across the table…
…past cookies awaiting Santa…
and straight into the glass which held a tooth for The Tooth Fairy.
CRASH! The tooth went flying.
The Tooth Fairy fluttered in. She peered under this and that, flitting from room to room. But no tooth. In the location where her Toothoscope had calculated a tooth deposit, she found…
“Cookies!? Tut tut tut,” chided The Tooth Fairy, “this will never do.”
She scooped the cookies into her tooth box. “This is a dental disaster,” she said.
Just then, who to her wondering eyes should appear?
“Ho ho ho,” called Santa. His twinkling eyes grew wide at the sight of the empty cookie plate. “What’s this? No cookies?!”
“Who are you?” asked The Tooth Fairy.
“I’m Santa Claus, of course!”
“You!” said The Tooth Fairy. “I should’ve known that the king of tooth-rotting candy canes, sugar plums, and peanut brittle would be a cookie connoisseur!”
“Those sweets you slander spread cheer!”
“Those sweets spread tooth decay!” said The Tooth Fairy. “Rotted teeth make terrible fairy dust. Santa, open your mouth and say ‘Aww.’”
“Aww,” said Santa.
“Oh, my,” said The Tooth Fairy.
On Christmas morning, the children scurried downstairs to discover, nestled in their stockings, candy canes and…
“Toothbrushes!?”
The note read:
Keep your sweet tooth jolly. Crunch on candy canes and then brush!
Sincerely,
Santa and The Tooth Fairy
How much fun is this!! Great story, Gabi.
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Thanks, David! 🙂
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I love your mashup! And the ending is so apropos. Thanks for a fun read. Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks for stopping by to read, Jilanne. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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Hahaha! Too funny. Loved this story and the surprise ending. Great job, Gabi!
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Thanks, Delfina! 🙂
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Compromise is the way to go 🙂
Candy canes and toothbrush. Love it!
Cute, clever, creative! best of luck to you, Gabi.
~Vicki
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Thanks! Hurray for compromise!
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Wonderful Tooth Fairy meets Santa mashup. Good luck in the contest (ps Santa always gives my kids new toothbrushes for Christmas!)
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Thanks, Christine! With all the sweets we’ve been eating, I think Santa ought to bring my kids new toothbrushes this year, too!
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Haha – what a fun story! Great job!
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Thanks, Jen! 🙂
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I love how they worked it out. Fun stuff!! Good luck 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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I’m so glad Santa and the Tooth Fairy were able to agree upon a sweet agreement. Love your story, Gabi! Best of luck to you. =)
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Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments, Jill!
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Fun story with a twist! Good luck!
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Thanks, Patricia! 🙂
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Gabi, this is brilliant! A Tooth Fairy vs. Santa smackdown. I think it might happen at our house this year, since my 8 year old has a tooth that’s half out but hanging on…probably till Christmas. Well written. Clever plot. Super surprise ending! I love the toothbrushes in the stockings.
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Ahh, thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments, Heather. 🙂
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What a great twist. Good luck!
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Thanks, Gregory! 🙂
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Love it! It’s original and funny and bound to delight kids!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by, Ann!
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What a clever, fun story Gabi! Love Santa and the Tooth Fairy facing off… and negotiating a compromise 🙂 Very creative! Thanks for joining in the Holiday fun!
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Thanks, Susanna! Your holiday writing contest makes me feel festive! 🙂
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Gabi, what a fun read. This is my favorite line, “Those sweets you slander spread cheer!” Great ending. Good luck!
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Thanks, Janie! 🙂
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Oooh this is such a fun mashup! I like that the tooth fairy is cranky. Great surprise and a fabulous little story.
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Thanks for stopping by, Mishka. Glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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